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we live
in frozen moments
strewn about a room
in seconds of dashing debonair
and graceful airs
pose
romantic prose
letters they'll never see
captured
like fish in a net
for someone to pick up
and set free
a bottled somethingness
in a sea of ambience
pose
in frozen moments
strewn about a room
in seconds of dashing debonair
and graceful airs
pose
romantic prose
letters they'll never see
captured
like fish in a net
for someone to pick up
and set free
a bottled somethingness
in a sea of ambience
pose
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This is an older poem (from 1999) that I'd like some feedback on. It's one of those poems that, for a while, I sneered at... but recent commentary on it's lead me to think that I'm being too self-critical, perhaps.
Free verse, visual structures (download to see it unmarred by the HTML parser)
Free verse, visual structures (download to see it unmarred by the HTML parser)
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Again the usage of words is amazing. It reminded of an extended Haiku if you will.